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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter three

    Hey chika! So I think you are doing a great job at writing. I adore your way of writing, it is very creative. I really cannot wait for your next ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Anna and Ryan- their story

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading your short story. You have a great way of writing and I adore your creativity. I was just sitting there, biting my nails in the ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: When I Play The Piano

    Hi! Wow, that was wonderful! I play the piano, myself. And I love it so much! So title caught my eye immediatly. I love the way you write, very creative ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Vision of the Sea

    Hi! Wow, that was sooooo beautiful! It was very enjoyable and you have a wonderful way of writing, you are very creative and I love the way you can describe ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Will you cry?

    Hi! I really enjoyed this poem, a lot! I have felt that way before, many times to be frank. Here are some of my little comments What if I die? ...

    Jan 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Stop and Stare. (edited)

    Hi! I loved this short story! You where very creative and I really enjoyed it. I don't care about punctuation and grammer so I wont be reviewing you about that. ...

    Jan 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I

    Hi Jash! Wow, you have AMAZING writing skillzzzzzz! The detail is wonderful and I can tell that the plot is great! I missed a lot by not reviewing sooner! Your ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Draw Near To Me Chapters 6-7

    Hi! Awww that was very bittersweet. But I kinda feel that it is going to fast, I mean we don't really know much about Jason right now. You did a ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Draw Near To Me

    Hi! I really enjoyed these three chapters. But I was very curious why he all of a sudden started talking to her after two weeks of not speaking to her. ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Darkness

    Hi! I really liked it. It was very creative, but I do wish that you made it longer, if your going to spend a 100 points on writing, you might ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: nothing

    Hi! Wow, that was beautiful! You really showed emotion and creativity in this piece. I wouldn't change a bit of it, it was amazing, perfect and full of emotion! I ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Suffocation

    Hi! Wow, I thought it was absolutely perfect. Don't change a thing about it. You described things very well and you were very creative. I could just imagine her there ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Things I Thought Before I Died: Part Three

    Hey! I loved this! It was very sweet. Wow, it was very bittersweat. I mean the whole death thing was sad and scary(but not in a bad way!) I hope ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Enchanter

    Hi! I really liked this short story! The way you discribed everything was brilliant, especially the woman herself, She was a completely different type of woman than all the pale ...

    Jan 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Man in the Rain

    Hi! I absolutly loved this short story. The name instantly caught my eye and the story fullfilled the amazing title. It was very bittersweat to me, but mostly heartbreaking. You ...

    Jan 11, 2011


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