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Re: Chapter three
Hey chika! So I think you are doing a great job at writing. I adore your way of writing, it is very creative. I really cannot wait for your next ...
Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:45 pm -
Re: Anna and Ryan- their story
Hi! I really enjoyed reading your short story. You have a great way of writing and I adore your creativity. I was just sitting there, biting my nails in the ...
Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:30 pm -
Re: When I Play The Piano
Hi! Wow, that was wonderful! I play the piano, myself. And I love it so much! So title caught my eye immediatly. I love the way you write, very creative ...
Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:02 pm -
Re: A Vision of the Sea
Hi! Wow, that was sooooo beautiful! It was very enjoyable and you have a wonderful way of writing, you are very creative and I love the way you can describe ...
Sun Jan 30, 2011 2:58 pm -
Re: Will you cry?
Hi! I really enjoyed this poem, a lot! I have felt that way before, many times to be frank. Here are some of my little comments What if I die? ...
Sun Jan 30, 2011 2:22 am -
Re: Stop and Stare. (edited)
Hi! I loved this short story! You where very creative and I really enjoyed it. I don't care about punctuation and grammer so I wont be reviewing you about that. ...
Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:48 pm -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I
Hi Jash! Wow, you have AMAZING writing skillzzzzzz! The detail is wonderful and I can tell that the plot is great! I missed a lot by not reviewing sooner! Your ...
Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:42 pm -
Re: Draw Near To Me Chapters 6-7
Hi! Awww that was very bittersweet. But I kinda feel that it is going to fast, I mean we don't really know much about Jason right now. You did a ...
Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:28 pm -
Re: Draw Near To Me
Hi! I really enjoyed these three chapters. But I was very curious why he all of a sudden started talking to her after two weeks of not speaking to her. ...
Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:15 pm -
Re: The Darkness
Hi! I really liked it. It was very creative, but I do wish that you made it longer, if your going to spend a 100 points on writing, you might ...
Sat Jan 15, 2011 5:14 pm -
Re: nothing
Hi! Wow, that was beautiful! You really showed emotion and creativity in this piece. I wouldn't change a bit of it, it was amazing, perfect and full of emotion! I ...
Sat Jan 15, 2011 5:10 pm -
Re: Suffocation
Hi! Wow, I thought it was absolutely perfect. Don't change a thing about it. You described things very well and you were very creative. I could just imagine her there ...
Sat Jan 15, 2011 5:03 pm -
Re: The Things I Thought Before I Died: Part Three
Hey! I loved this! It was very sweet. Wow, it was very bittersweat. I mean the whole death thing was sad and scary(but not in a bad way!) I hope ...
Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:00 am -
Re: The Enchanter
Hi! I really liked this short story! The way you discribed everything was brilliant, especially the woman herself, She was a completely different type of woman than all the pale ...
Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:52 am -
Re: The Man in the Rain
Hi! I absolutly loved this short story. The name instantly caught my eye and the story fullfilled the amazing title. It was very bittersweat to me, but mostly heartbreaking. You ...
Tue Jan 11, 2011 1:43 am
