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  • Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Angel of Death

    Dear MorningStar, I really enjoyed reading this. I love the story about Renee, and how she's dying. You have a brilliant way of describing the characters and their actions, I ...

    Sat Aug 04, 2012 12:15 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: I Imagined Death

    Hello StoryWeaver, First of all, thank you for your review. I really appreciate it. Wow, that was amazing. I love this story! I love everything about it. I love how ...

    Sat Jul 28, 2012 1:12 am
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Of Mortals and Gods; we do not speak

    Hello, PenguinAttack. Okay, this story is awesome. That was point number one. I love the theme of ancient gods and such. You don't see a lot of works about it ...

    Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:04 pm
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Out of Love

    Hey ForestQueen, I really liked this piece, you wrote it well. The message is so true and everyone has experienced falling out of love. In the first paragraph, you write ...

    Fri Jul 27, 2012 11:39 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: kissing your scars

    Hey, Sunshine. I really enjoyed reading your piece and it was very well written. The scars on her wrists are her cutting herself, yes? And what I like about this ...

    Fri Jul 27, 2012 11:20 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: woman

    Jas, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading your work. It is one of the best I have ever read! I'm not going to strip your work and ...

    Sun Jun 24, 2012 1:26 am
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: Parties

    Ikiru, Oh my god that was awesome. I absolutly loved it! The length was perfect and everything. You did such an amazing job and I just love the story. The ...

    Sun Jun 24, 2012 1:21 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I had a dream last night.

    Hello. I love how you write! This was so simple but so complex. I know that sounds weird, but it makes sense to me :) The length was perfect and ...

    Sun Dec 04, 2011 11:42 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: [Post Deleted]

    Hey I have read so many Beauty and The Beast stories, it is one of my favorite stories. But I never read one as good as yours. The detail was ...

    Sun Oct 16, 2011 1:49 pm
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: deleted

    Hi! I am not usually one to review, but this was so touching and truthful I had to tell how wonderful it was. You are so talented and I love ...

    Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:32 am
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A brief history of boys I fancied as a teenager

    Hi! This wont be too helpful, but I just wanted to say that this was brilliant! I would really like for you to write more about the boys in your ...

    Sat Jul 23, 2011 1:30 am
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Part 1

    Hi! I like your sense of humor, it brings a lot to the story. The detail was nice, not over used or under used and the plot is quite interesting ...

    Sun May 15, 2011 11:46 am
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Why are we here?

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading this! It was fun and rather passive-aggressve but halarious all the same. It got me thinking of an arguement I had with a peer. She ...

    Sat May 07, 2011 4:32 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You

    Hi! Wow, I really enjoyed reading this! It was so down to Earth and well... true! Thats just how love is! You wanna kill em and right before you do ...

    Sat May 07, 2011 2:52 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Roses are red...

    Hi! Oh, wow. The poem was very creative and I adore your imagination. The story was brilliant as well, the title hooked me immediatly and that is a very good ...

    Sat May 07, 2011 2:41 pm


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