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Hey
I have read so many Beauty and The Beast stories, it is one of my favorite stories.
But I never read one as good as yours. The detail was amazing, your vocab was sharp and wow, just awesome.
I love how you put the story together, and even though we already know the story, you took the time to explain certain things. I loved it. The length was perfect and the vocab was brilliant.
But I was a little confused in some spots. Like when he continued to weep. Why was he crying after they kissed? And I didn't like "Anton, my beloved." sorry, kinda to cheesy for me.
But everything else I just loved.
Thank you so much for posting this, and I hope to see more like this from you soon.
Oohh, me likey. Me likey. Is this for that Beauty and the Beast contest they are doing on here? If so, you are so going to win. I thought this was great. I have no complaints and if there were any mistakes I didn't notice them because I was completely drawn into the story. You created in a short time heaps of suspence and characters that I was rooting for as they raced time to defy fate.
Nice job.
~DG