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@creeperfeverdreams I applied your corrections about the part with Ricky happening too fast. I hope it helps

Gotta relate to this poem because the only thing that's keeping me from staying at home and sleeping all week is my bf. I mean he is the only thing ...

Hey creeper, thanks for reviewing my work. And thank you for bringing to my attention the pentagram. Its supposed to be an inverted pentagram.

OKAY OKAY OKAY LET ME JUST SAYYY... THIS IS SO AWESOMEEE! The song felt so lively and cute and fun, just OMG! I really have nothing to critique because its ...

I'm glad you enjoyed it

Don't apologize for your writing, it gives me more to think about, and I sometimes use the same language. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem

So the part you said you were confused about, just means that the narrator is a star in the sky that the other perspective takes out of the sky and ...

Okay so first, this is not my official art, I got most of the art from the cover of the Wings of Fire books and Ice Wings, is supposed to ...

your welcome!

thank u!

Thank you for your review and I'll keep your suggestions in mind!

Thank you for your review!

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i'll look into it!

your welcomee