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That was really cool! at first i thought this might be a wee bit corny but is actually really individual! I love how you have written this in a way ...

I have never read a poem like this before, its really interesting. I tip my hat to you being able to continue the repetition without losing interest as i know ...

WOW! so emotion filled, you have written this so well as i fully was captivated and understood with what you were saying. Whether this has happened, is happening or hasn't ...

This is a great piece of work, you have literally spoken for the majority of a lot of people including myself. Everything you wrote is completely true and as a ...

I enjoyed Reading this, it has very ominous feel about it which is awesome. For some reason i kept imagining a group of young children saying this, real spooky ha. ...

Wow this poem is devine completely, totally blew my mind! Your metaphors were awesome! I love how you gave us something tangible to hold on to which allowed you poem ...

Wow this poem is devine completely, totally blew my mind! Your metaphors were awesome! I love how you gave us something tangible to hold on to which allowed you poem ...

I really enjoyed this poem (first poem I've read so far) I loved the first half, it really made intrigued to keep going. So maybe next time leave it with ...