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I saw a few things that were misspelled. (Nitpicks) “Dinners ready,” should've been "Dinner's ready," because you shortened 'dinner is'. 'I dialled the number.' should've been 'I dialed the number

I'm reading your prologue a little late, well very late actually. I don't know if anyone noticed this, but you spelled cobbles wrong the second time. You spelled it cobles. ...

This either needs to be edited or something. I only see 1 and one half sentences. If you are saving something, you do not publish it. I'll give you a ...

I have already read the official first chapter of Kingdom of Boredom so this seems so wrong to me now. Now let's try to get you out of the green ...

You are right, it does make more sense when you read the prologue. If you don't then you wouldn't know what they were talking about. In the start, you said ...

Sorry I took a while to get to it. I was grounded because I was on the computer 1 minute after I had to put it up. What time is ...

That is longer than usual. 'Course it seems that way to me because I haven't had breakfast or my sugar filled tea yet. ---------------------------------REVIEW TIME-------------------------------------

It's awesome. I remember feeling like this once, when I was in, oh I don't know, 5th grade? In 5th grade I remember thinking everything I do wasn't good enough. ...

I like it, I just saw some things that need to be fixed. (Now it's time for) ----------------------------------REVIEW TIME----------------------------------- Well the thing I noticed first off is the

You shouldn't steal worlds from your book Mr. Plagiarism, Sir Copycat, Knight of Stealing. If your that stuck think of some words that define whatever the world is like and ...

I like it. Some things I need to ask as a review though (get this out of the green room) REVIEW TIME FOR PEOPLE LIKE YOU FROM ME At the ...

First of all I like your first stanza. It really brought the readers to question what they had been doing that night. Where were you, when those towers fell, when ...

Fiera is right you know. You do sound like an uber nerd using spreadsheets. Don't deny it. It's true. Nitpick- You said 'my byself'. Do you mean 'by myself'? I'm ...

DUN DUN DUNNNNNN Review time! 1) I thought at first that the witness was a human who witnessed Xavier turning into a vampire. Then I read further then realized that ...

You let Fiera have something that can alter the Third World?? All right, if you want Fiera to have power over a world that you made, go ahead then. Review ...