lordgluzman

He watched in horror as some tried to run but before darkness’ embrace they fell away from the Son SON SHOULD BE SUN That was the only mistake in the ...

Ok I will make a nother one and it will be true

OK that was good and really sad which was good because you were telling us your feelings. But the flying and the cancer doesn't really come together. Next time try ...

Thank you too

Ok now I get it. Thanks. You got a great theme!

OK........Um not bad, but too short and the rhyming wasn't the best but the theme was good. So basically you have a really good imagination you just need to improve ...

1) The descriptions in your poem are good! 2) The words used in your poem are good! 3) The theme for the poem I didn't really get... Can you PM ...

We really do good as team!!! I think we should this more.

Thank you again. LOL

Thank you

I liked the poem! Not all writers make their poems that long and that is good that you have a great imagination and you can stretch your poem. SO GREAT ...

Okay... Let me think.... I liked the poem the words were good and your letareture is really good. But I didn't get what was the poem about. Can you PM ...

Ow and the two wrong words are foregotten & beatiful They should be forgotten and beautiful.

that was coolio!!! I like the idea it is really unusual for people finding the good sights of the villains

I see that you are respectful to veterans and that is good + the poem was good but I would say that that was only the begging. It was too ...