lordgluzman

Great lyrics....I am thinking it as metal. After I read your comment I then understood the real meaning of this song. You have very interesting thoughts, but the problem was ...

This song was great, but I don't call it emo, I call it kick ass! The moral of the song was great and the words were used great. Anyways you ...

lololollol! This is funny, I wish it be a bit longer that is the only minus of this lyric. I imagined this song sang by one of the carachters from ...

Fuuny think I liked the song but I didnt get the theme beacuse I was reading it fast like rap (evan though I listen to heavy) untill this part Minds ...

To be honest I imagined it as metal. But it is beacuse the only thing I think about rock. The reason I felt that at some parts the vocalist screams ...

I liked this lyric but it was more to me like a storie, because I did not feel any rhythm. I tried to make a beat or a melody in ...

I imagined this being played at a disco. I felt it was pop and techno together with a tiny bit of rock recipe. But you need to edit your grammer. ...

The rhyming was good but the beat was out of control! First you would have a very long line then all of a sudden you have a line that is ...

I loved the song! It was great! I totally agree with you about it, I know how it feels, But that was more like a boy freind and girl freind ...

I really liked the lyrics, I imagined the singer from the band called In Flames singing this. But the problem that this song is short and basically your song is ...

I totally agree with Hawkie about the grammar. I also think this song was to short and I did not understand the theme of the song as well. I am ...

Holy crap....................This was awesome!!!! Though this is more like a poem. But as a song I am imagining, Corey Taylor, the singer from slipknot singing this. The rhyming was great ...

This song sounds pretty good. I think the rhyming was very good. Though I think that you need to change only one thing here. 1. You don't have to tell ...

the description was good of your emotions. Also the rhyming and the use of your adjectives was very nice and cool. But you are using the same old theme over ...

When I read this imagined a person reading this with a melody of a piano in the backround. This was really good but again to short for me. I wish ...