Published September 29, 2009
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I can imagine this song being played in a dance club, which is good if that is what you are trying to achieve or how it was supposed to sound?
Im sure it sounds great in your head. Whats what making music is all about. Its got to be personal and has to sound the way you think is best. The lyrics are good and perfectly suit the pop genre. Would sound good for a sound by someone like Basshunter. Keep going.
I imagined this being played at a disco. I felt it was pop and techno together with a tiny bit of rock recipe. But you need to edit your grammer. You should add question marks,periods, commas, and exclamation sighns to show how the vocalist would say the lines. Also you donät have to tell us if something is chrous, we can figuer that out by our selves. I really did like the point of the lyrics, good job and keep it up! Dont forget to use sighns!
thanks.
Okay. It may just be me. Sorry then. Good Job though.
~Kamas
Yeah, my song sounds nothing like that song by Darude, trust me.
I can very well see it as a pop song but it immediately reminded me of the song "Feel the Beat"
The problem with lyrics is that you have to listen to songs but it always relates to another song.
But besides that:
I feel the last line chokes it up. It doesn't flow as smoothly and makes it hacky.
the last two lines don't make any sense too me. Were you trying to say "Music lets us rock n' roll" ?
Wayyy to much like "Feel the Beat" I suggest changing that. Try listening to it:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mN84To5ndw0
(Feel the Beat By: Darude)
Though the song by Darude only has one repetitive piece of lyrics, that part comes sort of close to it. That's the only real problem I see in you're lyrics. If you feel it is too close you may want to change it.
Hope it helps,
Kamas
I really liked this. It was interesting how you did Feel the Music. It just seemed different and I kinda liked it. I think you could have organized it into verses and chorus. It would have been easier to read, but all in all I like it! I give you a thumbs up!