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Thank you very much, I'm always trying to get better!

Thank you, I really enjoyed writing it!

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Hello! I really did like this poem. I liked how the end came as a bit of a shock, I didn't realize the friend had died, at the beginning I ...

Thanks for reading! My goal here was exactly this. The poem angers you a little bit because you realize that conforming/following/changing is wrong. My hope was to inspire the readers ...

Thank you very much I'm glad that you can relate!

Thank you for the advice!

Thank you!!:) I agree this is not how people should live, I hope this little poem can show people that they shouldn't conform!!

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Thank you!!:)

Thank you so much!!

Thank you I fixed the typo!

I have nothing to say except wow. This was beautifully written. It flowed perfectly and was really meaningful. Please write more!