lilymoore

Hello Cookie ninja monster mabobber! *questions what she just called you* Here as *couch* requested *cough* I’m way too sleepy to read the other eight chapters, but I’ll definitely go ...

Hey there kingo! Around these here parts, they call me Lily! I an not who I truly am. Oops, typo! So, this is very simple and I think you could ...

Aust! How are you doing? *snugs* I think I shall review this! The DJ a guy I knew by sight but not by name. This here is a fragment. All ...

Hi there Paper! I’m Lily and I’m very pleased to finally make your acquaintance. *bows* On to the reviews! *skips over to the review-mobile* There was a flat bed of ...

Eeek, I have to review this. It has my name on it…well…plus an ‘l’ but still. Its bright yellow exterior glowing brightly against the dreary town. You have ‘bright’ and ...

Hi there books! Okay, so, I’m not the best poetry reviewer, but I’m doing my best to learn. And what better way to do that then to practice…on you! Never ...

Hi there, Nicko. Welcome to YWS! I’m pleased to make your acquaintance. *hands out muffins* Anyways, shall I review? I think I shall. :D Her bare feet slapped the wet ...

Honestly, Unknown, this isn’t your most impressive piece that I’ve read of yours. I mean, I can tell that you’re trying to do something new and funky, but this seems ...

Hello ICBF. So, I won’t claim to be an expert poet, but I’ll give it a try, that’s for sure. I try to plunge deeper there are still plenty of ...

Ello Jagged, shall we begin? The world is empty, but there is you, moving and living in this still-life ‘but there is you,’ sounds odd. I mean, I don’t think ...

Mango tango flango!.... :? Flango? Okay! Anyways, I’m Lily and I’m going to review you...whether you like it or not. Opening Line The clown was a girl, but nobody knew. ...

You are right about this needing work, PinguN, but that wouldn’t stop you, would it? I think you have a good base here, but what Prokaryote said made me think. ...

Hello there Final! Lily here to review you to death…well…maybe not to death but, you get what I’m saying, right. First off, as far as typos go, I only spotted ...

Well hello there, Jane! Here to review the heck out of this! Two thirty in the A.M. and I was the only conscious soul in the house. In the A.M. ...

Hello pencil! It’s nice to make your acquaintance. *hands a cookie* First off, I do want to say that Snoink is right. You leave a lot of questions unanswered. I ...