lilymoore

Hi there, Pixie! I don’t think we’ve ever been introduced but I’m lilymoore, one of the poetry JM’s and I’m here to review, your poem, if that’s alright with you ...

Hi there, creativity! The names lilymoore since I don’t believe and I have been introduced (though I may be wrong; who knows?). First off, I’ll say that your title caught ...

Hey there, Lyria! Lilymoore here as promised! :D So, since this is chunked up much more cleanly into stanzas instead of that big messy paragraph, I think I’ll just take ...

Hey there, wewinwelose! I don’t think we’ve been introduced before but folks around here call me Lily! :D So, I will say that you definitely want to spend more than ...

Well that was just terrifying …terrifyingly awesome. Okay, that was just blatently poor use of words. I apologize. It was, however, a wonderful piece and it definitely was a great ...

Hey there AJ. I have to apologize for how long it took me to get this review to you. It really took me some time to actually figure out just ...

Hey there, Flemzo! So, right off the bat, I loved this because of the title. Most poems lately seem to be titled in under a word. But you did something ...

Eeep! It’s a Persy poem! So I’ll start off with my two nitpicks for this piece, both for the same reason. . I didn’t realize were being pushed through the ...

Hey there, tgirly. I don’t think we’ve ever been formally introduced but I’m lilymoore! :D Anyways, I like the idea of parallelism that you used here in you poem and ...

Hey there, creativity. I won’t sit here and prattle on too much about nitpicks because, when it comes to short pieces like this, the focus isn’t on the grammar but ...

Hello, Abigail! Welcome to YWS! I hope you’re having a wonderful first week! :D Anyways, it’s reviewing time. The gentle cool wind of autumn had given way to the biting ...

Hey there, pettybage! So, it’s been some time since I’ve reviewed so bear with me; I might be a little rusty. Anyways, to begin with, you have a wonderful title. ...

Hey there, Flower~Child! Long time, no see! So, I don’t mean to sound harsh but this needs a good deal of work. No offense. I always remind and recommend that ...

Hey there Boo! So I’ll say right off the bat that StoryWeaver already made the biggest point I wanted to make. Using restraining poetic schemes like this can really limit ...

Holy what the heck! It’s a Mars! How long it’s been since I’ve last seen you! Too long! But this really isn’t the time or place for introductions because I’m ...