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Hi, galieu here! I really liked the Stranger when I read it last year, and part of me liking it was because of the almost equanimous tone Mersault had throughout ...

My skin is tingling. You are a talented writer, Elizabeth. When I read this, I kept think of ' The Tall-tale Heart' by Edgar Allan Poe. You make us realize ...

I'm going to recopy your story, and write my opinion in CAPITAL LETTERS.      I sat on my bag, in the same uncomfortable way I do every lunchtime since ...

It is a good start. I like the idea, but you need to give more information. We don't know about her, or her mum. How long gas she been gone? ...

Good! It is very good, Pixie. I'll write what I think in [brackets] In 1648 in Great Britain, A [ a shouldn't be capitalized] king was born. [I don't understand ...

It's very good. You could upload the music sometime. I'd like to hear it. I like it how you say Country songs are lame in a country song. I'm not ...

This was a good story, but, just like mine, your story goes too fast. You should describe what happens before they enter the field, while in the field, and once ...

Great Job! The only thing is why would any one burn a CHristmas tree!In the part when you say But I won't Find it in a gift shouldn't it be ...

Yep you were is dark and silly, but good. You should write something like this but as a novel.I think they weren't any grammar mistakes, so practicaly it is all ...

I really enjoyed it! You know I'm a Potter geek so you just made my day FUN! You should add Albus's letter in the next chappter, but the rest is ...

It is an Incredible poem! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! I am one of the biggest Harry Potter geeks ever so naturaly I

It is a really good story.You should really continue that story.You made some mistakes: 1. . His black, wavy hair been cut short, should be :his black, wavy hair had ...

Its really good! The name of the chapter cracked me up, but you did some mistakes. Like you say you are the prince's old friend and that he dissapeared two ...