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Re: What we are
Wow! If only I could write poetry like that. This poem was truly amazing! There was nothing really to review, so I'm just going to give you a high five. ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
Wow! Lol! This was a fun read, thanks giving me a laugh! -lilgreendots
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: The Bedside Angel
I agree with others. The last couple of the lines were the best out of the whole. There wasn't really much to review, so I'm sorry ): . You're really ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Dear You
Thanks everyone for the reviews, I'll work on adding to it right now (:
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Insomnia
This was a great story for just a preview. I didn't think someone could put great writing into little words but you did it, so I applaude you for that. ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Magnified by Jash Bagabaldo *tweaked*
This was so ANAZING!!!! I have never meet anyone as talented as you. You can write, draw, sing, what can't you do. Anyways great lyrics, and song. I'm sorry there's ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Help me with this poem?
victoria781, It was organized well, made sense, and I enjoyed reading it! You'll do great presenting it tommorow (I can feel it!) -lilgreendots
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: this is not a poem about love
Hey Jagged, There's nothing really to criticize. other than this was truly one of the best poems I have ever read. -lilgreendots
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: A Treasure Passed
Aquababe, This was a good poem considering you wrote it several years ago. I know people my age on older that couldn't even right that right now! There really isn't ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Grandmother's Watch.
Grandmother's Watch The coffee mug clicked against the glass plate underneath as he lifted it to his mouth, the contents sloshing against the sides due to his shaking hands. A ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Literary Devices
Thanks for the review, I didn't really edit these because they are rough drafts, but I'll be sure to change them. Thanks again. -lilgreendots
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: Mother's Day Poem
Thanks, I don't generally like do poetry, but I think I will elaborate in this :D
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Mother's Day Poem
I would have made it longer but the contest only let you use 25 words :( The one I entered was a little shorter but I gave the poem to ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: Mother's Day Poem
It was for a Why my mom deserves a diamond contest and I wrote a poem in the third grade and won her a red African gem that she put ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: Mother's Day Poem
Thanks for the review, I don't really write poetry, but I was thinking about the poem I wrote and I just thought I'd post it for fun.
Sep 27, 2010