lilchoma

okay so i like the idea of your poem, in terms of its being a quick burst of emotion (which i often find myself having to do). you do a ...

okay so my first thought when i saw the way you spelled things was "wow that's rather obnoxious". but when i read through the poem a couple of times, i ...

ouch darko, way to give helpful criticism. alright dogs, heres the thing: i don't exactly know what you were trying to do with this peice, but it's got a lot ...

okay so i have no idea what in heck this poem is about, or what any of it means, but i LOVED it. it was wayyyy awesome i don't even ...

actually i disagree with Black Night Werecat. now i don't swear, and i'm not for it or anything, but i actually didn't mind it in this poem. it really got ...

awwwww oh my goodness im like about to cry :( that was a WONDERFUL poem, and even though the picture at the bottom isnt actually a part of the poem, ...

okay i had a LOT of fun reading this poem, ill start with that. it was so fun to read like i read it in an english accent and everything, ...

"Unlike christian beliefs saying 'you shall no kill' which blatantly says, serial killers cant kill. And pedaphiles? No one is backing them up because they are hurting innocent children." okay ...

okay so i have NO idea what this poem is talking about but it is ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS. i LOVE it totally totally LOVE it. i dont know, your language is ...

okay so basically i really liked this. it was a little confusing with all of the grammar problems and junk that Proffessor Clever here mentioned, but i almost like it ...

okay so freaking AMAZING peice here. no joke. all the little nitpicks that people mentioned above, i think they should all be thrown into the garbage disposal, brought back up ...

okay well the rythm was a bit strange, and it didnt flow really unless you concentrate on saying it right, but thats the only critique i have. otherwise i really ...

i don't like ripping things apart, so i apologize in advance. but i very very very VERY STRONGLY DISLIKED this poem, which is a nice way of saying i hated ...

okay well im here to be the drenching rain on your little parade, im sorry to say. well sort of. i mean im not going to get all into my ...

you have SUCH a sophisticated vocabulary senorita rosa, which ive always been jealous of. i loved that aspect of this poem. okay maybe vocabulary isnt what i mean, its just ...