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Wow, I really like this piece! Especially how you call backstabbing friends "saviors" , because they really are. They really make you more aware of people. This is one of ...

Thank you :) I try to create a personal connection with each of my songs, so they actually mean something. Thanks for the review!

I agree, at first I was wondering why it kept repeating the same lines, but it really put passion and feeling into this piece. It really makes you feel the ...

Like I said, it was written a while ago. I was about twelve and it was one of my first tries. But thank you for the review :)

Great Expectations by Charles Dickens. I was forced to read it by my Honors English I teacher and was bored out of my mind until the very end. I've NEVER ...

Thank you both! And it could have been longer, but as I mentioned in the spoiler, I wrote this a while ago and I have a thing with leaving my ...

Thank you, and I did find it helpful. Though I must say, this was a different way of telling the classic forbidden love story, I understand what you mean about ...

Thank you for giving into your curiosity! :)

By the way, I like your signature :D

Thank you ^.^ I don't know what sparked it exactly, the first verse just popped into my mind and I had to write it down, and it turned into "Innocent ...

Very fast paced and entertaining. Very enjoyable!!

Very nice dialogue, quite impressive, but I was a little confused in the end.

I love it, I'm not sure what it is, but I love it! Keep up the good work! :)

Thank you very much :) There is more to come!

This is the first piece I've read on YWS, and it made me laugh out loud. Nice poem :)