lexy

LOVED IT. that was so clever, I loved your idea of using the young and innocent. a classic! good job, Lexy xxxx

cheered me up on a down day xxxx

are you dyslexic? therapy not theirpy. Hmmm, strange! xx

wow, when are you going to post the rest????

hmmm, poets have freedom so I've been told and when I went to a conference to see simon armitage that was the exact question I asked. "Is there a right ...

well actually....if you related to the poem in that way you may see it as depressing WHEN TO OTHERS it means something else. Like dissapointment........... a break up.............. don't just ...

brad really rubs me up the wrong way! No I think this piece is good, I understand exactly what you are trying to do here and I see you have ...

i don't think she is nine!!! lol, i like it, infact I really like it but it needs some tweaking here and there. (see comments above) well done xx

Damian pulled on his yellow raincoat and let his mother button it up to his chin. She smiled a beautiful smile and kissed the end of his nose tenderly. "School ...

I'm having trouble with establishing that he is being molly-coddled by his mother although he is older i.e his mum buttoning up his coat for him and buying him velcro ...

This is a beautiful piece, I love the imagery etc! Well done xxxxx

hear hear, i disagree with Brad too. Ouch he is harsh.... Yeah I think the imagery was good here. Did you mean cologne at the beginning though??? I can see ...

The only thing I can criticise is the repetition of the word "apple" in the first line but other than that... it was flowing and.... natural.

wow emotional subject. How did you find out about the info etc?? I think its well done... keep up the good work.

who the hell is going to know that song!???? after all it is in the top 100 worst songs of all time!!!!!!!!!! xxx lexy xxxx