Published December 7, 2005
Why doesn't anyone go on it? do you think it is funny? My uncle really is a priest so don't get all freaked out cause of it.
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I liked this if you made it more coherent it would make an amusing monologue please read mine and comment that would make me happy but that's aside from the point. I think if actually written in to a monologue format with a more direct story line it would be performance worthy.
Hahaha!!!
I busted up laughing because of how sad this one girl is.
<zelithon> I WONDER WHY NO ONE ELSE BUT US GO ON HERE? <-------- LMFAO!!! i COULD NOT stop laughing!
as the others have sead it is a little weard...but it's as funny as he(dubble hocky sticks)
... ( LL )
>i dont get it.
>me nither.
>what the hell are you doing here?
>shut up...
This is very confusing, but you seem mad...
O____o
But it was interesting...ish
RR*
are you dyslexic?
therapy not theirpy.
Hmmm, strange!
xx
This is weird. Well they do say that talking to yourself is the first sign of madness!
OKAY????? That seriously scared me... Note to self must go into Therepy soon.
it was um.... strange.
But i liked it, do a sequel!
it even says and she talks to her self so thats 2:1 haha ohhh
no she's not it's her apinion.
to be fair she is insane (no offence)
that's really good even though i agree with what zell said
lol great but seriously you should think do not talk to myself but hey its still great
Thxs for posting!
a little bit through I started doing different caps to help it be easyer to read, should
I do this font change again next time? Is this as good worse or better than the first?
I now need to go to the chatroom I mentioned.
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<zelithon> Hi
<zelithon> Hello agian
<zelithon> I invited other people on the chatroom
<zelithon> Why? Am I not good enouph for you? Jerk.
<zelithon> No of coarse you are ood enouph! You are the best!
<zelithon> really, or are you just saying that?
<zelithon> I love you!
<zelithon> SICK!
<zelithon> I meant like a sister
<zelithon> YOU DON'T LIKE YOUR SISTER
<zelithon> ok then, like I love myself
<zelithon> OK I GUESS I FORGIVE YOU
<zelithon> i guess no one else is coming on
<zelithon> DOES THAT BOTHER YOU?
<zelithon> no! definatly not! You are my favorate, how cuold I not be loyal to you?
<zelithon> I AM NOT SO SURE...
<zelithon> Have I everbetrayed you?
<zelithon> NO
<zelithon> see?
<zelithon> FINE, I AM SORY FOR BEING A BITCH
<zelithon> someone wants me to go on there chatroom
<zelithon> WITHOUT ME?
<zelithon> you cuold come too, I a m sure your gorgues looks will be welcomed
<zelithon> I AM PRETTY
<zelithon> yes you are
<zelithon> YOU ARE PRETTY TOO
<zelithon> thankyou
<zelithon> YOUR WELCOME
<zelithon> gtg, be back soon, i am going to other chatroom
<zelithon> I AM COMING TOO
<zelithon> K c u dare!
<zelithon> C YA!
And I thought me and my friend was bad.... O_____o;
Do another one!
You sad... sad... sad... (repeat numerous times) thing you!
Ugh...
You got to stop screaming at yourself, yourself gets angry and yourself as well!
...
Never... do this again!