leleparadise

Hey, Lele here for a review Just wanted to start off and say the decorative accents are beautiful. Helps the poem pop. An immediate attention grabber. This poem feels so ...

This poem has such a good lighthearted feel to it. The description for this poem really set it off for me because I feel joy for small wonders I find ...

I enjoyed reading this poem. It had a very nice flow. This line in particular intrigued me the most: "we're a religion dedicated to aftermaths..." This really hit home because ...

As short of a story as this is, it was pretty good. I only wish that you could’ve went in more detail about the feelings of regret. But then again, ...

I want to start off by saying you are a good writer. You know what’s interesting about today’s day in age, self acceptance has grown so much. You either love ...

I wish there was a love button for this poem. I love poems that are timeless and aren’t focused on just one single audience type. You worded this so beautifully ...

The 5-7-5 syllable count is there Sweet, short and to the point Very nice for an attempt. For the next haiku, if you decide to write about the same topic, ...

Hey there, I'm here to review your poem. First off, I love the polar opposites yet the slight similarities to the different realities you described in the poem. Between life ...

Hey, Lele here again to give you a review. First off, I feel as though you used the letter "u" to symbolize something. Still trying to sort out what. I ...