leleparadise
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I want to start off by saying you are a good writer. You know what’s interesting about today’s day in age, self acceptance has grown so much. You either love ...
Feb 12, 2018
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I wish there was a love button for this poem. I love poems that are timeless and aren’t focused on just one single audience type. You worded this so beautifully ...
Feb 12, 2018
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The 5-7-5 syllable count is there Sweet, short and to the point Very nice for an attempt. For the next haiku, if you decide to write about the same topic, ...
Feb 8, 2018
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Hey there, I'm here to review your poem. First off, I love the polar opposites yet the slight similarities to the different realities you described in the poem. Between life ...
Feb 8, 2018
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Hey, Lele here again to give you a review. First off, I feel as though you used the letter "u" to symbolize something. Still trying to sort out what. I ...
Feb 8, 2018
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