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Re: Untitled
I love your poem, its has amazing imagery. Good job on it!!! I love the last part, very nice ending in my opinion.
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Letter to the World
This.Is.Deep. I love it!!! It almost made me cry, and during some parts I couldn't read on because of that. But I did, and I love it!!!
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: hearing the sound of silence
There were lots of noticeable spelling and grammar errors, but other than those I really loved this. It spoke truth and understanding of what girls and boys think of everyday. ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: No longer a poem!
I love this poem, its full of so much feeling...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: And so I write.
I love this so bad, its very very well written and I couldn't nit pick anything. I love this!!!!
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
I loved the rhymes, made me smile. Because the message is true down to the grain, or the atom, or whatever. I love it, like it, keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Always and forever
I love the rhythm of the words, the rhymes fit nicely into your poem. I also like the truth in it, because these days these words are true. hope this ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: Battle Scars
I love the detailed imagery, and your word choice is....very good. I am not good at nitpicking, but I hope that the ones above me did, and it made up ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Sisterly Affection
It reflected sisterly affection in an easy to read and very good manner. Great job, keep writing!!!!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: It's hard to be anything
Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: It's hard to be anything
Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: It's hard to be anything
Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: It's hard to be anything
Heart touching, this really makes you think, there are no errors that I could notice, so all I have to say is good job and keep writing!!!!!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: echoes
As usual, the things I noticed have been picked out by the eyes of others before me, saving me time and words. So all there is left for me to ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Diary of a Lost Soul
it was said, very sad. I think that emotion was weaved into your words.
May 27, 2011