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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Hey, Mother.

    I thought it was a vampire poem. It was actually made feel queezy. And the descriptions were so good I feel like I am going to throw up. No lie, ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If You Only Knew My Name

    That is a good idea, a letter to yourself. Genius.

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If You Only Knew My Name

    I can feel the emotion from this poem, no lie. Where did you get the inspiration?

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Charlie The Cheat

    All of your poems make me laugh. I like this because you rhyme really good.

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: A song I wrote

    I really like these lyrics and I think that they can be improved a little bit, but only a little because I believe in keeping the original lyrics. I love ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Got thicket juice in my pocket.

    I don't really get that. I don't. but I love the words in this poem, the words are really good. But what is the motive of this poem?

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Read This! It's Great!

    It sounds more about popular mean girls like the book The Clique. I like this poem ,really. I can really figure out the dog parts of the poem, though. I ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Best Friend..yeah right

    I love this so much. This poem is full with so much emotion that I really, really love this poem. I am following you, I am telling you now. I ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: An Ode To Mathematics

    I like this poem, but I don't get it. What is it about? Who is it about? But the most important of all questions. Why did you write it? If ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re:

    I love this, mostly because my birthday is coming up. But, I really like it, it deals with the real emotions. but, I have not been in school since I ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Geeks

    I really like this poem. It really describes me. Because sometimes, I play with toys. *Hides blond headed Barbie behind her back*. And some people think that I am weird. ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Bigger than man

    I really seriously love this poem. It is like you are telling a story, and a sad one, at that. I love it, though. I don't know how to correct ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Despair

    Overall I like this poem, it is dramatic and I love the words in it. But, it should have more descriptions of the pain you feel and why you feel ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    I tried to correct my poem.

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: ---

    I loved it. I feel deep sympathy for the "character" of this other poem. I loved it.

    Mar 11, 2011


I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights