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Re: Ugly and Beautiful, Terrible and Amazing.
hello, its Le, and guess what? I love it. I think that it is really good. I was long, but not super long. And I like the way you did ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Trevor The Tyrant
I need to get to writing because I have some tough competition. You are so good. How long did it take you to write this? Or have you already had ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Roberto Who Was Greedy
I seriously can't get enough of your poems. They are funny and have great morals. And, like I said last time, the rhyming and the wording are the best parts. ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Cornelia Who Was Sneaky
I really like this and the ending is pretty unexpected but thats what I like. I don't feel like you could improve anything on this here poem. It has everything ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Sarah's Reply
it is a sad poem as well as a good poem and it has a little bit awesome poem in there. I really like this and think that you should ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: all about me
Okay, here it is. I was really short and I don't really know much about you with the descriptions you gave. I think that you should write more. And if ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Why Can't You See?
Oh, I really like this song, like really like this. I can imagine the sour looks that girl gives that boy or that boy gives that girl. I really like ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: All The Faces - Inspiration
I liked this poem but I need to know one little thing. What is the motive and moral. I need to know because I like the words but I didn't ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Drifting
I really like this poem. But what does it mean? What is the subject? Did someone break the writers heart? I needed more specific writing. Not that your isn't, but ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: In Between
It is a really good poem. But I kind of got lost about the feeling of it. Really, I did. Is it about choosing between two boys? Two friends? You ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: I Love You
The rhythm in this poem was getting real old when I was reading it, not to be harsh. And you used though two times and that takes away from the ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Cupcake
I LOVE CUPCAKES. I mean who doesn't they would have to have something wrong with their taste buds. Oh man, I love me some cupcakes. You did a great job ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: The Serendipity Theory
I am a believer in this theory. I have been thinking about it a long time, but I just didn't know the right word for my idea. I like this, ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: The Secret Society of Bad Haircuts and Messed Up Eyebrows
I liked this. It talks about not caring about self image, I am big on that. And it is rather funny at the same time. jeep writing. I loved it ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: John Steinbeck's "Of Mice & Men"
II know right. I love Lenny and George. But it was sad when he had to shoot Lenny. I love the way Lenny used to dream of the farm they ...
Mar 8, 2011