leeanna13097

Hi, antaseaD! I shall be your reviewer for today :D. I'm not going to go into the grammatical errors since crescent all ready did that for you, but I just ...

Hey there, GoldenQuill! I really like this! I wish there was tiny bit more detail (e.g. where is this placed, when is it happening, why is it happening), but other ...

Hey, Greg!! Welcome to YWS! I'm Lee-Anna, and I'll be your reviewer for today. :D This is good! I like the idea of the story so far. I haven't really ...

Hey, WalkInTheSun! I'm not the best at reviewing poetry, but I'll try. :) I like this poem!! I like the idea for the story/poem. This is something I caught, though: ...

Hey, Siona! I really like this! It's very well written. I agree with fiction903, though. I think you need a few more commas in some places. Once again, great job! ...

Hey, Siona! This is hilarious !! Almost as good as Llamas Online, lol. Okay, just a few grammatical errors: Okay, so I was on this balcony and I'm waiting for ...

Hey, Classy! First, I'd like to say this a great story idea! I do kind of agree with BondGirl007, however. How does he even know anything about her? And, since ...

Hello, Siona!! That was stellar! :D. The only thing that I saw that no one else nit-picked is: AS we are born we chase every breath a chase every heart ...

Hey, Smiles! I accept your challenge! I'm not going to tear it apart, though.... It was really good! :) I haven't read chapter one, but I will soon! There was ...

Hey, Lydia! This was really awesome, but also sad. Just one grammatical error I noticed: Friends and loved ones voices say I think ones and friends should be possesive. It ...

Hey, Shelby! This was pretty wicked!! :D I agree with BondGirl007, though, on the whole not-much-like-a-prologue thing. Oh, there's only one error I spotted: I jumped ahead and spin around. ...

Aww, this is sad!! But it's actually really stellar :). Just a few typos and/or grammatical errors I noticed: “Oh my God!” Cried Clair, running up and tackling me into ...

Hey, Lee-Anna here! Oh, my gosh, I loved this! I can't find anything to nit-pick :). I just have one question, though--how are you supposed to pronounce Razhel? I can ...

Hey, Lee-Anna here! Since the rest of the reviewers have all ready commented on the length, details, and the Is not being capitalized, I'm going to critique the grammar. "Jango?" ...

You want me to pick just one?! Okay, here's my list: 1. Mortal Instruments trilogy by Cassandra Clare 2. Hush, Hush by Becca Fitzpatrick 3. Warriors books by Erin Hunter ...