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Re: Live
MWHAHA! I FINALY CHECKED IT! Is this the one you ment? Anyway it is now:) ... I like it. I sometimes feel the same way, actually when i was younger ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: that soft classic music
The image this creates is really powerful and I loved it! It actually reminded me of a book I read (If I Stay) that includes a car crash where the ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Ballroom
DONT CHANGE IT! i love it, who cares if the stupid people out there dont get it:P i think you have an awesome idea here and i like the way ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Before I Die
I think you've got a good theme here for your poem, but the rhyming seems a bit forced unfortunately. Is believe in yourself 'cause you are you Don't let anyone ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: How Can I?
WOW! I adore this, and think its very well written. So emotional and from the soul:) The words flow really nicely and it achieves its purpose in communicating the feelings ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
HEYY! xD I just realised you have a very "story-telling" kind of way of writing, if you know what i mean:P or maybe its just cuz of the little red ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: to be loved part 1
I think you've got a nice idea here, although there are some spelling mistakes and a few small bits that could be improved. Overall, I think its well done for ...
Mar 31, 2011