lauren16

Woah, I'm pretty sure no one seen that coming. This is amazing! I need to read more of your works :) Keep up the good work! -Lauren

I love that this poem is really relatable and about memories of the past. Anyone can relate to memories and when they were a child. I like how you said ...

This is really cute! It's a nice little unique and funny poem. And yeah it's meowing is annoying but addicting, haha. I like your cat! It's really good and cute. ...

okay, thank you! I will keep that in mind. :)

This poem has a lot of meaning to it. I like the message it gives. The only thing is the line The rose bushes red. I would change it to ...

Oh, yeah haha.

Good topic! Very relatable. I actually find old things all the time! Overall the poem is really good. It doesn't really have a flow to it but it's still good. ...

Thank you! Haha! :)

Yeah, too bad this is how things usually are these days.

Yeah, you are understanding correctly. Thank you!

Thank you! And yeah I wasn't really going for the deep and full of feelings kind of thing. I just wanted it short and simple. I might add more to ...

Thank you! I will probably add more to it sometime. I just wrote it kind of quickly. :)

Merry Christmas to you too! :)

This is a cute and funny poem. I like reading a poem that's not all serious sometimes. The title is really good too. I'm not good at punctuation and that ...

Hi! This is a really great haiku. It was easy for me to understand and picture it actually happening. I've never read a poem about a samurai. It is very ...