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Hi kingolions, The Imagery was great and very descriptive, allowing the reading to see what you were meaning. Couldn't find any errors in your poem, in general it was good ...

Hi Solvalery, Again another great poem! Not to into the religion issue, but i understood the meaning. =D Cant wait to see more!

Hi SilentRain, Your poem, showed alot of passion and love for you sister, i have nothing bad to say about your poem. keep up the good work.=P

thank you for the comment, I understand what you are trying to say. The reason why you may be confused with "Zooming by, knowing there is a wish." Is that ...

Hi there, I quite like your poem, and formatting, it really tells a good story, of love. I can relate to this and I enjoyed reading this.

Hi niccinic, sorry if it disappointed you, but to answer your questions, the lost night, even in the day the body of emotions can make it feel as your lost ...

Hi there, it was a good poem, layed out nicely, allowing the pauses to create the image you are giving. every line had a general image in how you see ...

A very good poem indeed!!!! great descriptive, shows that you care about our world and what we have done to it. relating to the fact of real events, proves handy ...

it was a very good poem, i thought anyhow, very descriptive and such. it showed creativeness and gave a good image of what you were explaining. good work =D

Very good, liked the formating

i quite liked this poem, and thought it was very well said, great description, how evil she is.