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my apologies for the very late reply. i had no idea how to respond to such a lovely, greatly invested and long review and thank you for the advice. i ...

aw yw! youre a wonderful poet and youre just getting better and better! im definitely tuning in for more after reading this one!! keep writing :>

woahr. no words here really. youve been improving and it shows. this was so uniquely captivating, i love this so much!!

hellooo!! first off, thank you very much for giving such an engaging long review to my work! i very much appreciate your commentary, and you have a great grasp on ...

you're welcome!! and aw thank you very much, glad you enjoyed the review!! i get it, and i adore when people show that part of writers! and thanks for the ...

aw yw :> !!

fair criticisms, thank you for the input! to comment on the ambiguity of agency: when writing the poem, my intention was for the speaker's perceptions of the relationship, but mostly ...

awww tyy!! i really appreciate this comment so much!! ty for taking the time out of your day to do so, and this lovely comment!!

i love how the song format is utilized here! it allows build-up to the end that really did shock me at the end. gosh what a twist!! this is great!!

you're welcome!! of course, youre so talented! and dont worry... bittersweetness is always an interesting thing to play with in your works- i cant help but love it! you're welcome ...

yw!! im so glad!! you're welcome :>

nehe i bet so!! just was trying to find more stuff to read :3 this was a great, unique poem!! YW!!

wow. what a poem. honestly too kind of shocked to even properly type words but like Wow. Wow!!!

text version! bone crack bone crack bone crack bone cracks    stretched body                             releasing the heaviness of a â€

"- the one thing I didn't definitely pick up is this "immense fear" for the colony's safety!" is what i meant.