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Re: Part 2 of The long night
Thank you for all your feedback but if someone has already pointed something out can you not as it gets very confusing I am only new at this and havent ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: The long night
Thank you for giving your feedback it was really helpful
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Time goes by
Hey Thats a really cool story and interesting. It hooked me in straight away. Its a topic nobody else would have usually thought about doing. Well done & Good luck
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: The blind girls plea
hey this is a beautiful poem and it makes you feel what the blind girl is going through.I love the rhyming and think that you have got real talent to ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Violent father and mother
Thanxs 4 everybodys reviews i kinda knew that i wouldnt really get good coments back as this is m first story that i have submitted but thanxs
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Mary the Slave girl
Hae this has got potential plz keep writing as your first sentence drew me in.
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: About a Mill Girl
Thanks Hae great start it pulls you in and wants to make you read more
Jul 13, 2009