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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Good Life - Chapter Five: Ready, Set...

    After reading this do you think that it seems like April is the one who doesn't want to have sex or Daniel? One of my friend's read it & they ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    I am speechless at the amount of comments and likes this poem has gotten. This is it's forth day on the Literary Spotlight and it is still the second piece ...

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    I think it's a great idea! I would love to be a part of it, like help pick out character names & stuff like that!

    Apr 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: The princess with cancer.

    This was beautifully written. It's rather haunting in that it has such a fairytale feel to it but it's so real & raw. I really think that there needs to ...

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    That would be amazing! PM me about your plans :)

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Thank-you! I have a couple of chapters posted from my novel! Here's the link to the fist one: :)

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Thanks for all the amazing reviews and comments! Everyone's words have been nothing but kind and super helpful. I'm really glad that so many people can relate to this, I'm ...

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Hey! You make a really good point! Any suggestions on how I can fix that line?

    Apr 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Hey guys! Thanks for all the amazing reviews! Fortunatley, this isn't based on real events, I don't know if I'd be able to write on if it was. It's just ...

    Apr 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I fell in love with a boy in five inch heels

    This was breathtakingly beautiful. My best friend is still in the closet, too afraid to admit to anyone that he is in love with an amazing guy. He's too afraid ...

    Apr 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I fell in love with a boy in five inch heels

    This was breathtakingly beautiful. My best friend is still in the closet, too afraid to admit to anyone that he is in love with an amazing guy. He's too afraid ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Funeral

    Hey! I really liked your poem, it shows exactly what a funeral is like. Well done :) I would have liked a little more though, have you considered expanding? I ...

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Other Re: Untitled Novel - Prologue

    First of all congratulations are in order for winning writer of the week, so congrats! :) From reading this I can tell you really, really deserve it :) Although, I ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Film Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses

    This was great! I can't really find much to critique but I just wanted to let you know I thought it was really well written, you kept my attention the ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Good Life - Chapter Four: Little Fisher in the Big Sea

    Thank-you so, so much! You have no idea how amazing your reviews are. They're not only helpful but a major self confidence boost!

    Mar 8, 2014


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