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Hi, Welcome to YWS! This the best site to post all your writing ideas. I only joined in January and I'm already in love with this site. So, this is ...

Hi, I liked this poem. It was very interesting and different. I didn't get why he did it at the beginning, i liked how, (no offense) it was a stupid ...

Hi, Excellent job on this piece. Really good writing. There is not much for me to crit. I really wasn't expecting him to be a boy. I thought it was ...

Hi, I liked this poem. Did you know that someone else wrote a poem called waiting as well? Anyways I really liked both. My favorite line had to be: The ...

Hi, I really liked your poem. It was really sweet. I can relate to this poem, which I like because there are not many out there that you can relate ...

Hi, Wow, this poem was good. I kind of startled me when I read f*cking though. I do curse myself ,but never heard it in a poem like that. You ...

Hi T. Wow, this is one of your better poems. I like this better then mixed singles. It was so sweet and I know it wasn't based on a true ...

Hi, Very well done. It was short and sweet. It's nice once in a while to read stories like this. There is not much else I can say. I thought ...

Hi, Wow! This story is funny, i loved it. Like someone said early though, it's in the wrong section. Where did you ever come with an idea like this? I ...

Hi, For your first time writing poetry, it is really well done. I am not much poetry person. I really enjoyed this though! My favorite line has to be: Smoke ...

Hi, I really enjoyed the story line for this. I love reading about these types of things. There is not much else I can say about it. I liked this ...

Hi A, So there are a fix mistakes here, that I'm going to fix (in bold). I'm also going to space it out so it will be easier for people ...

Hi, Your story line is really well done. I really like the idea. It felt really rushed to me though, how you just kind of jumped from, 4 to 7 ...

Hi, Wow! This poem was excellent. You did a really good job on this. I didn't really understand this part though: Farewell my murderers, I'll see you in hell. I ...

Hi, That story was very creative, I liked the choppy style. I never heard of a story done like that before. I have read stories told in animals points of ...