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Hi, This always happens to me. I read a really great story and say "Oh, I can't wait to review this" when everyone has already helped that person with their ...

Hi, So you have a lot of comments on this and I would personally give you A. I really enjoyed your story and even though there were a couple mistakes ...

Hi, I see no one else has had the chance to critique so I will be the first. Here . Here is a city, the city is called Intercourse. A ...

Hi, I see that no one else has had the chance to critique yet, so I will be the first. I never truly understood what it felt like to lose ...

Hi, This always happens to me. I go to comment on a poem and everything is already said that could be said. The only thing I can say to you ...

Hi, I wanted to tell you how much I liked your story. I did however notice a few mistakes but after reading over the comments I noticed that they have ...

Hi, Your story was very well written. It really made me feel for both characters of the story. I can't say much else because everyone else has pretty much covered ...

Hi, I liked to say that this story was very well written and the imagery was phenomenal. I liked how there was no dialouge in the begining though, I never ...

Hi, So everyone pretty much took care of all the fixing mistake things. I really can't say anything, everyone did it for me. :lol: I really liked your story, it ...

Hi, I haven't critc' in a while. I'm not going to say much, about this. I really like it, very creative. I really liked the perspective you took. We chose ...

Hi, I really liked your story. It was a nice short read. I don't think I can say much else. I didn't see anything wrong with it. I liked the ...

Hi, Your story was cute. I really liked it. It was a nice short read. Are you going to continue with it? I have an idea, you don't have to ...

Hi, I really liked your poem. It was very strong. I feel like I can relate to it. Please write more poems like this. It is hard to come across ...

Hi, I like your story. I want to find out more about it. I found it kind of weird how Sam just openly told the person sitting next to him ...

Hi, I liked you story. It was interesting, a bit hard to follow, but a nice read. Also like KJ mentioned, I didn't understand whose angry people where and why ...