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Hi, I really liked your piece of work. I have one question though, why does it say 'Dear Lucy' then say 'Sincerely, Lucy'. This part confused me, however I am ...

Hi, I'm too tired to write a full review, so I'll do it tomorrow. I know, silly reason to still write a reply, but however, I am. I really liked ...

Hi, First of all, you shouldn't say that! On this site someone will defiantly read it! Next time just write a bit more, some people will read something short then ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! I hope you'll love this site as much as I do :) First things first, on this site you need to write two reviews for every ...

Hi, This is the first time that I've ever cried from reading a story on this site. If this is your real life, I am terribly sorry and hope that ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! I see your new here, but for every piece of work you post, you need to reviews, preferably done before. Also, this needs to be rated ...

Hi, Loved it! I couldn't agree more. She uses words that don't fit and stuff over again. If you ever do a sequel to this I have something that she ...

Hi, All I can say is strange but wonderful. I never really thought of Bellatrix anything other then evil. I like it, keep writing. I love HP fan-fiction :) Love, ...

Hi, Your poem has so much potential, but why make it so short? It could have so much more! And where is the description? I wake. Silver in the morning ...

Hi, Very good job on expressing emotion in the poem! We lost power but it was alright We got a generator and once again our lights shone bright. The second ...

Hi, I see your new here, so I'll try not to be too harsh :) I'm going to critic your story in the document then re-post it here, so you ...

Hi, I see no one has criticed your work yet so I will have the pleasure of being first. Once upon a time in a dank and dilapidated village in ...

Hi, Like olivia1987uk said, I would consider changing the names. Not both but just maybe one. Change the boy's name maybe. I really like the name Bella too. I really ...

Hi, Excellent story. It had me fully interested the whole way. No one else has done a critique yet so here it goes. First you dry your hair I didn't ...

Hey Kels, I moved my letter to Historical Fiction. You should move yours too. I think its in the wrong place here :) If you need more editing done send ...