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  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Best Friend

    Hey there! I really, really like your poem

    Apr 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Just Tired

    This is beautiful. It is so realistic and reading something so raw is truly refreshing. I have depression myself and this is 100% what it feels like. No one gets ...

    Apr 2, 2015
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Are you there?

    Hello! First off, I want to say that I really like your poem. It is so honest and raw and I'm sure most everyone can relate to it. To be ...

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Supernatural Re: Chandelier

    Hey! I really liked this and I noticed in the description you said your family has a history of mental illnesses, I can relate to that. I thought this story ...

    Jul 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Righteous in my own way

    Wow! You have an insane amount of talent. This poem was sooo good! I’m speechless right now. It upsets me that it doesn’t have more reviews but I think I ...

    Jul 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Letters

    Hey! I really liked this, from the start you captured my attention which is something any writer strives for! The concept was really cool and it was extremely well-written, you ...

    Jul 29, 2014
  • Other » Narrative, General Re: How Does One Say Goodbye?

    This was truly beautiful, you have no idea how much this affected me. My father died when I was 11 years old and I was in the same boat as ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Life Story

    Hey! I really like the way this poem was written but I think it could have done with a little more editing; there are obvious spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Hello, How Are You?

    Hey! I really enjoyed this poem, I think it's something that most people can relate to, I know I sure can. I don't know if it's just me or if ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Love Conquers All

    Hey! I really liked this poem, I thought it was very witty and love the idea of using as many cliches as possible. I can't find much to critique because ...

    May 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: "Happy Birthday, Fred."

    Hello! First of all I have to say this was amazing! I started crying even before I read the story, the title alone brings about bittersweet memories of reading Harry ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: It Was A Chrome World

    Wow. When I first started reading this I couldn't believe there weren't any reviews but then I realized it's probably because it's SO good that people wouldn't know what to ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Always Remember...

    Hey! This poem was really well done :) It kind of reminds me of what Aibileen says to May Mobley in The Help! A few things to point out... The ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: Deleted

    First of all I love Lorde, she is by far one of the better singers out there. I enjoy the fact that her songs aren't about being in love because ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Only tears fall

    Hey there :) I haven't read your friend's story but I really, really like what you have written! I love the ending, it speaks the truth so perfectly and it ...

    Jan 29, 2014


october smells like being ten years old and not scared of anything
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