ladcat13

Wow. Just... wow. Amazing! The emotion is so profound and well-expressed. I love the wistful, hopeful, and almost disappointed tone taken on by the narrator. You are very good at ...

Wow! That was very, very nice. I like the simple but powerful description, and the undercurrent of emotion. However, there are a few typos: "FORGETING about the end of the ...

This story was cute and all, but some things were kinda self-contradictory. And you should try to use some synonyms for words like "happy" and "looked" and idiots. The story ...

Nice job. I like the hints of a crush going on there. But be careful, because although your rhym scheme was consistent, some of the flow was sacrificed. You may ...

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Nice job. I like the hints of a crush going on there. But be careful, because although your rhym scheme was consistent, some of the flow was sacrificed. You may ...

I can't offer any more critisism than has already been said. I liked the storyline a lot, and your writing style is very eloquent. Your sentence structure could use some ...

That is SO FREAKIN COOL! I've read most of your work, more then you've posted here, and this has got to have been THE BEST WORK you have EVER done! ...

Ok, there were a lot of kingdoms there. I got kinda confused, trying to keep who was who and where was where in my head. You might want to add ...

I can't really say anything that hasn't been said already. Interruptions in the flow because of formatting and commas, cliche, quotation mark spacing, and that's it. Nothing that can't be ...

This has improved significantly from the last time I read it. I likee, very muchee. I can't really say much else from what my peer have said. Although, you might ...

Sorry I didn't get around to writing a review until now, but I was so pressed for time that I couldn't finish reading it until now :? But now that ...

Careful about the tense. There was a little bit in the middle that was in the present tense. Other than that, you already know how great I think this is. ...

I'm glad he refused! I like the ending. There's lots of emotions in there, and I like how you phrased it just right. I also like the descriptions. Terse and ...

I like this very much. It is a sweet and musical message of hope and love that is very comforting. But there are a few mistakes. If you read it ...

carbonCore is right about the "Normals" thing, but other than that this story was amazing! great descritption, great plot, great opening, great closing, great flow, great voice, great tone, great ...