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Sorry I didn't get around to writing a review until now, but I was so pressed for time that I couldn't finish reading it until now
But now that I have read the whole thing through and the paragraph/question mark thingis fixed, it was great! Fabulous! Fantastic! Wonderful! Delightful! Flawless! Well, actually, not quite flawless. There were a few run-on sentences. If you read it through out loud to yoursefl, I'm sure you'll catch them. Other than that, it was great! I couldn'tfind many other mistakes: few breaks in flow or rythm, few grammatical errots, few inconsistancies, wonderful descriptions! As usual, keep writing! I look forward to reading some of your other work!
I just have one thing to say. WHAT'S WITH THE QUSTION MARKS??? Is it supposed to show the way someone speak when they say everything as a question. I really don't understand it, I won't dwell on it anymore. It was just a concern I had. Sorry for getting all serious.
No When i copy and paste the "" show up as ??? for some reason so i have to figure out a new way to copy and paste becuase i can't fix it. It's so annoying i don't know what to do
I do agree with MissCaroline that the lack of paragraphs and the question mark thing is confusing. Maybe the reason the formatting screwed up is because of the font you had it in on Word. Is it Times New Roman or is it something else really weird? But still, if you add the paragraphs and fix the quotation marks, it sounds like it would be really cool! I didn't read it all the way, though. It sounds promising. Re-submit it and I'll read it all the way through
Hi there.
I did not read your story because it all seemed so overwhelming without the paragraphs, but that's okay! I know how to help! My computer does the exact same thing with the no "tab" button pushing. I learned that making an indentation is just the same as pushing the space bar five times. So that's what I do to make my start of a paragraph. I hope it helps you out!
My paragraphing and my quotes don't work. If I copy and paste it from word it pushes everything together. Is that normal? My laptop has tab and enter but this site won't let me use the tab and enter bars. Yet other people's stories have indents and qoutes
There are two ways to paragraph your story, tabbing and entering. You can enter two times to make an empty line for the next paragraph.
Guys i'm really sorry. I don't know how to correctly submit my work apparently
it keeps screwing the " and paragraphing up. If anyone will tell me how to fix my stories it would be muchly appreciated. I feel really stupid for not understanding how to 
I keep trying to copy and paste from word.
Where's the story? 0_o
exactly. I don't know how to copy and paste my story from word doc. to the submit section. It keeps making all my paragraphs lump together and I can't tab or start new paragraphs. If you can tell me how to i'll post the actual story :/ please help me
why don't you try to copy and paste one paragraph at a time?
i never tried that but there is no harm in trying
you know, you could type it up on titan pad, highlight the whole story, right click it and hit, copy, then go to the submitting page, right click where your story goes and hit, paste,then correct all mistakes. It works like a wee charm.
you know, you could type it up on titan pad, highlight the whole story, right click it and hit, copy, then go to the submitting page, right click where your story goes and hit, paste,then correct all mistakes. It works like a wee charm.
titan pad? I don't know what that is. I tried copying and pasting but when i fix the mistakes i still can't indent or start new paragraphs and "" don't show up usaully. It's weird i tink I'm going to try google documents someone suggested that