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  • Short Story » Satire, Satire Re: Irrelevant, Anti-climatic Plot Twist

    A rather strange short story by... Well, @Strange. I have two little nitpicks: one, you used the word "I" in the beginnings of the sentences a LOT. It has a ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Spiritual Re: Immanuel's Veins

    Oh my god! (speaking of god). I'm literally quivering right now. This was too wonderful for words! I could try to tell you how much I loved this, and make ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: i am don.

    That's me and my mom right there... but only sometimes. Hee hee, very funny! *golf applause, serious face*................ *cracks up* Sorry, couldn't keep that up for long. *raucous applause* Another

    Feb 10, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Win?

    *Drops from sky* Rawr! Ladcat here for a review! Nice job with this! I love how it was from the point of view of the horse. You obviously know what ...

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Lust

    Nice poem, full of beautiful phrases! I only think that a good idea would be to make the lines longer, combine some or add syllables to others. That'll improve the ...

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Don't fall

    *Drops from the sky* Rawr! Ladcat here for review... I like your poem very much. Instead of glorifying suicide (I've read many of those on this website, nearly wrote one ...

    Feb 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: Moral Zero - Part V

    *Drops from sky* Rawr! Guess who? Heehee. I think this one was my favorite parts so far. I can't write a review; I've already told you everything I like and ...

    Feb 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: A million sorry hearts go sailing

    Rawr! *drops out of sky* It's ladcat here to review! The word "Wow" is starting to lose its meaning so I'll find another word if you'll give me a second.... ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I'm Giving up

    Ladcat here for a review! Though short, you convey nice emotion in this poem. Great job with rhythm and rhyme scheme, both are well-developed and consistent. I appreciate that you ...

    Feb 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: Moral Zero - Part IV

    Ladcat here for a review! My first review of your works was on a bad day, so let's try this again on a good day. First, I want to applaud ...

    Feb 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Why do you sit by the window?

    ...... My mind is blown by the perfection. *does the little mind-blow thingy from the AT&T commercial* Let's see if I can write a review that's not all glowing praise, ...

    Feb 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: When the sweet child swims

    Rawr! Ladcat here for a review! This poem sounds good enough to be one of the poems we read in Honors English! I wouldn't be surprised to find it among ...

    Feb 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Proudly Psychopathic

    Ladcat here, for a review! I like this... Despite that the main character is a sociopath. I'm also impressed that you managed to make me like him... Oh wait, that ...

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Narrative Re: Eater of Dimensions, Part II

    Hi, horrendous! Ladcat here for a review! Mwahahahaha... I read both parts of this story, and I must say I like it very much! You have a few run-ons in ...

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Something Called a Friend

    Hi, ladcat13 here with a review! I love the symbolism of this poem! (That is, if I interpreted it correctly. I can be a derp when it comes to poetry) ...

    Jan 29, 2014


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