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Re: Irrelevant, Anti-climatic Plot Twist
A rather strange short story by... Well, @Strange. I have two little nitpicks: one, you used the word "I" in the beginnings of the sentences a LOT. It has a ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: Immanuel's Veins
Oh my god! (speaking of god). I'm literally quivering right now. This was too wonderful for words! I could try to tell you how much I loved this, and make ...
Feb 15, 2014 -
Re: i am don.
That's me and my mom right there... but only sometimes. Hee hee, very funny! *golf applause, serious face*................ *cracks up* Sorry, couldn't keep that up for long. *raucous applause* Another
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: Win?
*Drops from sky* Rawr! Ladcat here for a review! Nice job with this! I love how it was from the point of view of the horse. You obviously know what ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: Lust
Nice poem, full of beautiful phrases! I only think that a good idea would be to make the lines longer, combine some or add syllables to others. That'll improve the ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: Don't fall
*Drops from the sky* Rawr! Ladcat here for review... I like your poem very much. Instead of glorifying suicide (I've read many of those on this website, nearly wrote one ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part V
*Drops from sky* Rawr! Guess who? Heehee. I think this one was my favorite parts so far. I can't write a review; I've already told you everything I like and ...
Feb 7, 2014 -
Re: A million sorry hearts go sailing
Rawr! *drops out of sky* It's ladcat here to review! The word "Wow" is starting to lose its meaning so I'll find another word if you'll give me a second.... ...
Feb 4, 2014 -
Re: I'm Giving up
Ladcat here for a review! Though short, you convey nice emotion in this poem. Great job with rhythm and rhyme scheme, both are well-developed and consistent. I appreciate that you ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Moral Zero - Part IV
Ladcat here for a review! My first review of your works was on a bad day, so let's try this again on a good day. First, I want to applaud ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Why do you sit by the window?
...... My mind is blown by the perfection. *does the little mind-blow thingy from the AT&T commercial* Let's see if I can write a review that's not all glowing praise, ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: When the sweet child swims
Rawr! Ladcat here for a review! This poem sounds good enough to be one of the poems we read in Honors English! I wouldn't be surprised to find it among ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Proudly Psychopathic
Ladcat here, for a review! I like this... Despite that the main character is a sociopath. I'm also impressed that you managed to make me like him... Oh wait, that ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Eater of Dimensions, Part II
Hi, horrendous! Ladcat here for a review! Mwahahahaha... I read both parts of this story, and I must say I like it very much! You have a few run-ons in ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: Something Called a Friend
Hi, ladcat13 here with a review! I love the symbolism of this poem! (That is, if I interpreted it correctly. I can be a derp when it comes to poetry) ...
Jan 29, 2014
