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Re: My Little Girl
Hello TheDarkWriter! I think this might be the most sweetest and well written poem I have ever read. (quote/)My little girl all dressed in white, Her smile shone brighter than ...
Oct 29, 2015 -
Re: dear you.
(quote/)it means nothing anymore just a phrase said too many times like your name your name that i've written out so many times(quote/) With this stanza, I think you should ...
Oct 27, 2015 -
Re: The tiny one.
Hey Ashwath, your writing is so good! I thought of some ideas for your poem if you wanted to make some changes or this could help you for your next ...
Oct 22, 2015 -
Re: Fall
Hello Mudkippi! Love this poem so much! It got me in the fall spirit! My favorite part of the poem is when you say [/quote]Slowly falling... Falling.... Falling...[/quote] You did ...
Oct 16, 2015 -
Re: Hate Is Soooooooooo Cliche
Hey TheSilverFox, I love your poem! I read it multiple times. If you wanted to make any changes to this poem or you want some ideas for your next poem, ...
Oct 9, 2015
