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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Little Girl

    Hello TheDarkWriter! I think this might be the most sweetest and well written poem I have ever read. (quote/)My little girl all dressed in white, Her smile shone brighter than ...

    Oct 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: dear you.

    (quote/)it means nothing anymore just a phrase said too many times like your name your name that i've written out so many times(quote/) With this stanza, I think you should ...

    Oct 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The tiny one.

    Hey Ashwath, your writing is so good! I thought of some ideas for your poem if you wanted to make some changes or this could help you for your next ...

    Oct 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Fall

    Hello Mudkippi! Love this poem so much! It got me in the fall spirit! My favorite part of the poem is when you say [/quote]Slowly falling... Falling.... Falling...[/quote] You did ...

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Hate Is Soooooooooo Cliche

    Hey TheSilverFox, I love your poem! I read it multiple times. If you wanted to make any changes to this poem or you want some ideas for your next poem, ...

    Oct 9, 2015


That, sir, is the most frightening battlefield in the world: the blank page.
— Larry McMurtry, Comanche Moon