Hey TheSilverFox,
I love your poem! I read it multiple times. If you wanted to make any changes to this poem or you want some ideas for your next poem, I have some advice for you.
I hated him at first sight.
- Explain why you hate him. Give details about him and what makes you hate him.
Auf Wiedersehen!
-Explain what this means and why you used it.
His eyes were the blue
Of an immense, deep ocean.
But, as I told myself,
Not the kind that I'd swim in.
- I absolutely loved the first stanza of your poem. It was said so beautifully and described so well. I like the comparison to the ocean.
Great Job!
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