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Re: Lucky Girl
Hello there :) It's Kristina here and I am going to give you my feedback about your poem "Lucky Girl." First of all, you have put such nice words in ...
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Re: Neglected
Hello Hanorah, it's Kristina here and I am going to give you my feedback about your poem "Neglected." I loved reading your poem. It is a simple, short poem but ...
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Re: I Looked in His Eyes
Hi, it's Kristina here. I'm going to give you my feedback :) Well, first of all, such a nice poem. It's simple, easy to understand, but enjoyable to read. It ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: How Are You
Hello, Kristina here to give you my feedback :) First of all, I like your poem. It sounds interesting, and throughout the poem, I felt sorry for the narrator to ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Fat Cat
I enjoyed reading your poem! :) It is the first humorous poem which I have read so far on this site. It is a simple poem, mainly easy for everyone ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Hope.
Wow, what a beautiful poem. It is short, but every word has such a special meaning. You wrote it from your heart, I can tell :) And you're only 12? ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Insecurities
You are one of my favourite poets here! Again, yes, I enjoyed reading this poem. The rhythym, the image... are perfect. You used repetition again of some words, which made ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: A prayer
Hello there, it's Kristina here :) I feel very curious about your poem. It is very short, with only 3 verses. But still, it makes the readers think. I think ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: A Break-Up Poem
Another beautiful, interesting, realistic poem. The first poem of yours which I read was "Come back to me". This, "A break up poem" is the second. First, when I saw ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Come Back To Me
Wowwww such a beautiful poem!! Really, I enjoyed reading every word, every stanza. I don't know if this is based on a "true story", but it sounds so realistic, which ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Sometimes I wonder.
Wowww I really enjoyed reading your poem. In fact, all verses make sense. I like the way how you ended with: "Sometimes I wonder I wonder if it's fair Sometimes ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Memories
Hello there :) Such a nice poem, even if it's short. At first when I started reading, I thought that there are no rhyming verses/words, but when I continued, I ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Lighthouse
Hi Liaya! It's Kristina here. :) First of all, I have to say that you are a very good poet. Your poems that I have read so far, all make ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Lighthouse
Hello there :) First of all well done on your poem , I really liked it. And as the person beneath me said, it really sounds like a song to ...
Aug 30, 2013
