kittykat_luva

I like this a lot. :D (addicted to sci-fi) then reality hit me: the city was destroyed. Houses lay in rubble, light posts and electrical lines scattered the streets, cars ...

I like this, it's short and simple but it says alot in not-very-many words. It's easy to understand, which is good, as I havn't read ch1. :D A few things ...

Yeah I agree with thinky person. Yeah mabey if someone slits there wrists and mopes all day bout nothing and complain you could call them an 'emo' (I have nothing ...

I like it although it was a bit confusing, it sounds a litle like a movie I've seen but I don't remember the name. :wink: I noticed that quite often ...

I liked it but it is a bit confusing. And I don't really get how his arm could cross the arch of his nose... *trys it* I guess you could, ...

I like it, but definatly break it up, it is very hard to read when it is all in a big block like that, but I do like the story. ...

I like it, it doesn't have a set rhythm, but thats ok. Although the definition of poem says it has to follow a set rhythm, I like poems that don't ...

I like it, I like it. There was no spelling or grammar mistakes (better than I could do). But I think it would be better if you made it into ...

So sweet :smt054 You should show her! at least your mum is cool, wish I could say the same for mine. At least I have a good cuz hehe :P

Hehe brings back memories... I like it, although the first half was better. And how did they get a letter if he only left like ten minutes ago? that bit ...

Wow, I like it! A bit confusing, I thought her twin was looking in a mirror or something! The first bit could be a bit better although it's already cool. ...