kittykat

What was up with the random capital letters? It was okay, not really great. Still, I liked it. :D

I liked it, so wait... The angel burned to dust and you were crying, but then in the end the angel is flying again? Wait...what?

at least this one was better than the part 1...wasn't it? thanks for all the advice everyone! :D I'm going to try to make every next part a little bit ...

I didn't care for it very much due to the fact that I don't know what a marrionette is...

the lines don't go together very well for me, but it did have something to do with the title. I don't know what else to write about this piece of ...

it was okay, but my question is why isn't there any punctuation at all in this poem? you know... if you read this out loud then it sort of sounds ...

It was beautiful... I'm sorry but I'm a good at critiquing work. I liked it a lot. :)

It's so deep and mysterious... I wish I could say more why I like it but, it's hard to explain why...

uh... shouldn't you write the rest of your own poem?

Thank you iQuippie for noticing that I'm 11 and my work isn't going to be as great as someone that is older. I have asked other people what they think ...

Well I have to say this is not one of my favorite posts... I thought I would like it because there was so many reviews on it. I agree with ...

Uh... I don't know what to put. Nothing here made any sense to me. What are you talking about in your poem? 1. we need to know what your talking ...

Thanks for writing more! If this is short for your standards then your going to think that what I posted is microscopic! It's a lot shorter than this, trust me...

I'm not very good at giving reviews... but I wish this poem was a bit longer, still an excellent piece of work though!

when I read it, it felt sad but I couldn't stop reading. this is why I love other poetry... :)