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Re: Teenager
Great poem! i became a teen just a few years ago, and am shocked constantly by how long ago my childhood was. the first few lines, reminiscing about young childhood ...
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Re: I exist
great poem! whenever i experience derealization, it does feel a lot like how it's described in this. I especially relate to, " You feel as if you are watching from ...
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Re: Waiting
very creative poem! I like how you tell many stories, all in one line each, rather than just one story, though all are connected. its also nice how you go ...
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Re: She chose science
great job with your work! i like how you compare great loudness with silence, how she heard too much, so she tried to hear more of something better, and then ...
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Re: Some kind of monster land: A clown doll [Part One]
Hi! great work! firstly, this is a great concept, and i think you portrayed a good combination of a ten yo and a monster. i also think you portrayed the ...
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Re: To Heal Is To Hurt
great story! all through reading this, i was intrigued, it was all very interesting! firstly, i find the idea of a world where helping causes pain refreshing almost! so many ...
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Re: Preparation Day
what a great story! i live part time in Nauvoo, a Mormon town that is even the burial spot of the founder, joseph smith. since living there, I've learned a ...
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Re: The choice
Hi! great piece of work. Honestly, while i did love it, i haven't seen "Are You Afraid of the Dark" in a while, but this is a good reminder, especially ...
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Re: nothing created, nothing destroyed
wow, i love how much thought you were able to fit in so few lines! Also, the last few lines remind me of the "if you put an apple in ...
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Re: Raisa’s diary entry (4/18/1955)
i love Raisa's confidence lol, she knows she's pretty and she doesn't seem to fear Aeliana at all, once she gets over the blood, even missing her company when she ...
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Re: Palworld Vs Pokemon – What Precedent Is This Setting?
its clear you put lots of effort into studying and researching data for this topic, as well as providing exact numbers, explanations, and events, and that's pretty respectable for the ...
Sep 24, 2025
