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  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: true love

    Beautiful, just beautiful. I cried when I read this. It is just so beautiful.

    Jan 31, 2018
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: true love

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    Beautiful, just beautiful. I cried when I read this. It is just so beautiful.

    Jan 31, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: My Cheesecake Addiction

    Thanks for the review!! I will be the first to admit that I am horrible at grammar and need people to proof read a lot. Maybe instead of cheesecake I ...

    Jan 22, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: My Cheesecake Addiction

    Awww thanks!!!

    Jan 22, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: My Cheesecake Addiction

    Aww thanks for the review! I'm glad that I'm not the only one with the food addiction. I'm glad you like it! ilyt!

    Jan 19, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: My Cheesecake Addiction

    Thanks for the review. As you can see I am not that great with grammar and comma placement, but I thank you for the constructive criticism.

    Jan 19, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Stereotypical High School Love Story: The Documentary

    Aww thanks!!

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Forest

    Hey I'm just gonna leave a review here. I love this poem. The way you described everything was just so beautiful. It makes your poem almost real and i could ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Humor Re: May I ask....?

    Hey I'm just gonna leave a review here. I could not stop laughing, this was really funny. The way you had what happened to Johanson happen to Garibaldi was so ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Stereotypical High School Love Story: The Documentary

    Female teen writer appreciates the review that the male reader wrote and will think about it. Female teen writer will try out the suggestion.

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Purple Blossoms

    Hey Im just gonna leave a review here. Wow this is really good! You kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time. There is one thing i ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Stereotypical High School Love Story: The Documentary

    Awww thanks!

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Stereotypical High School Love Story: The Documentary

    should I be scared??????? Is something gonna happen to me????

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: The Hartmans - Chapter One

    This is such a good story! I love how you kept me wanting more. One thing I saw and got kinda confused was: “David,” Richie turned to his twin brother ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Unforgiving (Tumblr Prompted)

    I love how you took the deities and turned them into ravens. It was weird but it matched so well. I love how you had the day and night fight ...

    Jan 9, 2018


You flare, you flicker, you fade... And in the end, all your tomorrows become yesterdays.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)