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Hey. This is a good poem. It has a good story and meaning to it, and it is not too long. I like how you talk about the butterflies, then ...

Hey. I think this is great. I really like the idea of what the glass wall is. It is deep and thoughtful. One nitpick I have, is that I don't ...

Hey. I enjoyed this. It was a good length and not too long, and it had a good rhyme and rhythm to it. I think it is a great effort ...

Hey. I think this was really well written. It wasn't long and drawn out like it could have been, and the repetition had a good impact. I also liked how ...

Hey. This wasn't what I was expecting. It was very different to how I thought it would turn out. When I was reading the first part, I thought it was ...

Hey CaptianRandom. I really like these quotes. There good, and they make you think. It's not what many people would write, and it is good that it has your own ...

Hey. I thought this poem was, nice. It was good, but it could have been better. I did enjoy it when I read it, but I agree with flower, that ...

Hey. This is a really good poem. It is a lot like something I would write. It has a good imagery of the flower, and what it really is. One ...

Hey. Firstly, I think the ratio is more like 2:1 now, but I may be wrong too. I did like this poem, and it is good for a first try. ...

Hey. I think that this is great. It is short, and doesn't drag on, and it's right to the point. What I really like, is the last too lines. It ...

Hey. This is a really good poem. I think it has really good imagery, and meaning. But I do also agree that it can be worked on. I think though, ...

Hey. This is a good poem. It is descriptive, and paints an image, but you might want to elaborate on what you are saying. You say nothing about the rose ...

Hey. I like this poem. It isn't a common theme to use, but it is still good. The only thing I have to say it that maybe you shouldn't break ...

Hey. I like that this is short. Most people say that things are too short, and the make poems drag on forever. What I am wondering though, is who is ...

Hey. Really good poem. I thought it all read well and flowed well. It also made me think about what you were asking. I think it is well written, and ...