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Hey. I thought that this was really good. I think it didn't flow greatly at some points, but worked most of the way through. I really liked the idea you ...

Hey. I thought this was a good poem. But I don't particularly like the repetition of the last line either. I thought it was good at the start, but then ...

Hey. I thought that this was really good. I tried writing something like this a bit back, but I failed. You did well though. I thought that the contradictions worked ...

Hey. This isn't a type of poem that is seen very often. (Or maybe that's just me) But I liked the idea of it. There are a few things I ...

Hey Coter. This is an interesting poem. There are both things I like and dislike. What I like, is the idea of the poem, and what you are trying to ...

Hey. This is a good poem. It is well written, and has a good flow to it. What I find with a lot of poems, is that if they rhyme, ...

Hey. I'll put it this way. There are problems with this poem. Firstly, in the first section, you are just saying point about what you think. And the line 'rain ...

Hay. I quite liked this poem. Unlike Galerius, after I read the first two lines, I thought that this wasn't going to be that great, because I found that your ...

Hey. I have to say, that I too agree and disagree. I don't think the stanzas were too cliche. I personalty liked the last stanza the most. I liked how ...

Hey. This is a very interesting poem. I found that strangely, it flowed decently well, even though the stanzas were broken up in awkward places. What I liked about the ...

Hey. I really like the idea of the poem. I know others may not, but I do. there isn't much crtisism I have for this piece, except that I don't ...

Hey. This was really good. It was discripitive, in a way that didn't tell you evrything, but told you what you needed to know, and it was a good length. ...

Hey. This is the first time I'm reviewing like this, so if I stuff us, sorry. My stuff will hopefully be in red. Sometimes I feel invisible No one sees ...

Hey. I thought that this was a good idea for a poem, and with a few changes, it could be better. The first thing I have to say is that ...

Hey. There are good things and bad things in this poem. The first line, 'Break me the sunset in a cup;' doesn't seem to work. I read the poem a ...