kingofwernogs

Great job! I think you summed up the spirit of Review Day very well. I can definitely relate to the competetive attitude, the fatigue, the anxiety as you nervously watch ...

I actually don't think that the Bible mentions a time frame for humanity. There is the part with the descendants of Adam, and you could estimate, but I don't think

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Hilarious!

Quick suggestion: you may want to consider naming characters after actual crew members of the Titanic (e.g. Fred Fleet, the person on lookout duty when the iceberg struck).

Sorry, I thought you got confused about the name.

It's good.

Definitely depressing, but very good.

Sorry

Sorry about this!

Hello! Kingofwernogs here, reviewing your first story. I have to say, this story was great. It really evoked a sense of awe and captured the feelings of the narrator. However, ...

Thanks! I like Douglas Adams to, although I wasn't particularly inspired by him. I am also open to suggestions for my upcoming sequel. P.S. I read some of your stuff ...