kingofeli

No capitalization was the intent in this poem ^^ otherwise thank you very much for this kind review!

Again, I did do this in the style similar to ee cummings with no/little capitalization ^^ so it's meant to be like that. Ah, sorry for making you cry though! ...

Yep! Spot on

Actually I did that on purpose ^^ the structure of the poem is meant to be something like ee cummings, with no or little punctuation/capitalization

Most people use this word in a demeaning way or as a slur, just like with the n-word. It's nothing new and it's nothing a specific generation can be blamed ...

Oh, thank you for the review though!

R*tard is a slur, not simply an insult. Slurs are slurs, and everything needs to be worked on. There are lots of problems in society, and not a single one ...

They're always members of the gang, and when they're cats, they're literally cats; they walk on four paws, meow, etc.

Considering "idiot" is also an ableist word which dehumanizes mentally disabled people, I'd stop using that word as well.

Thanks so much for the review! Charlie's backstory isn't as out of place when it's in with the whole chapter, as this is just the second half.

Ah, it's a lot smoother now. Your poetry is very enjoyable, you should hear that more often ^^

Ah okay. Thanks for clearing that up!

No problem! Ah, thanks for the backstory. You might want to put that in at the end, just so people don't get confused ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed my interpretation ...

Ah, I accidentally re-submitted. Ignore this!

Ah, sorry! I was typing fast so I didn't really check for typos x.x this was also written a while ago, I just kind of posted it here for a ...