kingofeli

Aww, this poem was really sweet! I like how it offered us an insight into your life, and your life with your mother. I hope you ended up showing it ...

Even though I haven't read the other chapter, I'm liking this story already. I didn't see many grammar or spelling errors, and the story flowed smoothly, though it was very ...

This is a pretty good chapter, with an interesting flow and characters. I know this is just an exercise to flesh out characters and you don't really know what to ...

I really enjoyed reading this, as it's much different than anything I've read before. I've never read something from the perspective of a leaf, and while I was skeptical coming ...

This is an interesting poem, as are the rest that I have read from you! There were a few errors in spelling, but there were not many; you spelled "angel" ...

If this were a story, there would be a lot of critiquing to be done here, but since this is a letter that you wrote, I'm going to be more ...

It truly is a shame that no one's reviewed or commented on this piece, as I really enjoy it, although I didn't get to read chapter one. I can get ...

Wow, I quite enjoyed this little poem! It was good and flowed well from beginning to end, without any big interruptions to stop my reading and the voice that came ...

This left me shaking. The destruction of innocence, how they so callously and coldly claimed the lives of all of those people, and how inhumane it was when they finally ...

This poem hits me especially hard as I am transgender myself, and am currently observing the transgender day of remembrance. It's hard to think of all of my brothers, sisters, ...

Ahh, I happened to scroll down and find that it was a lion before I got the chance to figure it out x.x but this was a very good riddle, ...

Wow. This is a really good piece of work, even though it jumps around chronologically, I enjoyed reading it from start to finish. I noticed that you said it was ...

Wow, this story really gave me some chills. Even though this is very short, it kept me interested from the beginning to end, and the unanswered question hangs in my ...

Although this story was a little bit skippy, I was hooked into reading it from beginning to end, just to see what was going to happen with Nina. It's an ...

This is a very action packed story, and I enjoyed it from beginning to end. The dream sequence in the first part was very poignant; it shows the main conflict ...