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Hey tosh!!! Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it. Your advice was really good, actually! I've edited it once, mainly for grammar errors and stuff, and I think I'll probably ...

It's a joke, right? Because Sureal seems much smarter in the debates and on here his grammar is really bad. *ponders* Okay, then, whatever!

Back for more! “What did you call me for, at this late hour?” the first shadow whispered. Zekyll bit his lip [s]so that he would [/s] to remain quiet. Whatever ...

I have a problem. I got lost in the first paragraph... What is happening?

Thanks Jared! I have a couple of questions, though. First, I'll list of some of the good things you had: - Cool characters Second, some bad things you had: - ...

It was...interesting. Really, I liked it pretty good. I don't necessarily agree with all of it (especially the last two lines), but that's for another day. I thought it was ...

I liked this, especially the whole "these two once fought it out". You should write stuff like this more often!

Most of it, I liked. I love the last line, because it's exactly how I feel about somebody I know. Great work!

Alright people, somebody go read my Death at a Funeral story already!! lol... Derek, I have no idea what you're talking about on that first part. The second part you're ...

Oh, well, if you have a specific reason for what you did, then don't mind what I'm saying!

Thanks guys!!! Today I have to go to a piano audition thing, and then I think I'm going to write another short story (and edit some of the book I've ...

I shortened it so that three of my characters weren't even introduced. I was just editing, and it did seem a bit long to put on here.

Thanks to both of you guys for the reviews! I realize this is a long selection and people probably don't want to take the time to read it. This did ...

I'm not a poem type of person, but this was very well written and I thought I'd tell you that. I know you probably hate to not have any critiquing, ...

Well, thanks to both of you guys for the reviews! What both of you said means a lot to me. I was real surprised when the guy says that he's ...