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  • Short Story » Romantic, Other Re: The Magician's Spell

    Hey there! Really interesting start to this story! I really am enjoying this so far! First things first, I like the main character a lot, and you got me to ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: I ate the sun for him

    Hey there! Well, let me just say: man! What a way of writing! This poem is really interesting because of all the descriptions you made! This is so beautifully done! ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: Simplicity

    Hey there! I have to say: Bravo! You have a way with making someone very sad, very quickly. *sniffs* I love Sherlock so much, but he has a serious problem. ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Last We Met

    Hello! Wow... You made me feel really sorry! Wah~ I love the flow of your short story, how it feels poetic like HunterEdwards said, and the transition from short to ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: [deleted]

    Hey there! Man... I love historical stuff, and I really love this! Great job on this poem! I really liked how you formatted this into a single stanza, and how ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Don't Speak: Chapter Seven

    Hello! Okay, to start things off, no I haven't read the chapters of this novel, but I will try my best to review this regardless! I have to say, I ...

    Oct 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: It's Been Fun, Percy

    Hey there! This is one very interesting haiku. I absolutely love this poem, being a fellow Percy Jackson fan(-atic) and find it very cute. I really like that you put ...

    Oct 8, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Review, Literature Re: Comparing 'Annabel Lee' and 'The Highwayman'

    Hello there! I like your ideas a lot; you wrote a pretty good essay! First things first, please make your first paragraph longer, or at least put something interesting at ...

    Oct 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Romantic Re: The Tragedy of Waiting

    Wow... I liked this story a lot! I found the characters very amusing, such as Nora, "guitar girl" and Textbook. I see how this is romantic, judged from the beginning ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: I Shot Santa Claus in Self-Defense

    Hey there! Man... what a story you wrote! The minute I started reading this, I was smiling and this close to laughing my butt off, but I couldn't because I ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Everyone was Dying but Our Love Wasn't I Think

    Hello there! Alright, I have to say this is really good! I could picture the scene of the world falling apart, of two people holding on to each other with ...

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Observations

    Wow... Amazing piece of work you have here! I love the three different stanzas, how you introduced the two characters, then tied it all up with a third. I have ...

    Sep 21, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Struggle

    Hello there! Well, let me just say you've got a way with putting a big message in lyrics! This is really well written, and I could find myself singing the ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Rebirth

    Wow! Okay, just let me say this: great job on this! I really liked how you introduced the character as a determined, fierce individual. That's a good grabber you got ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Lyrical Re: You Can Hate Me but Not as Much as I Hate Myself

    Hi there! This was a really interesting and different read! I feel like lots of teenagers can truly relate to this, because, I mean, who doesn't like Starbucks or McDonalds? ...

    Sep 18, 2014


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